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Tumblr URL: the-car-thief
Age: 21
Language: English
Original Stories: Y
Fanfiction: Y
Fandoms: Harry Potter, Merlin, BBC Sherlock, Elementary, Captain America movies, My Chemical Romance
Preference: I prefer stories with complicated plots, especially original works.
Refused Content: non-con, dub-con, any form of sexual abuse, bdsm, pwp, crossdressing, mpreg, incest. If your story has kinks that I find too much for me, I’ll just skip that part and won’t be able to offer any criticism on that.
Strengths: grammar, tense consistency, spelling, flow/structure, syntax. I don’t know if this can be considered a strength but I’ll be able to return you your story fairly quickly since I’m on school break till August and have lots of free time.
Weaknesses: research and brit-picking. My Harry Potter knowledge is a bit rusty so I may not recognise minor factual errors. Also, I’m crap at writing smut so I can’t help you with that, either.
Previous stories written: none that I’ve posted online
Anything else you want to say? I’ve never beta-ed a fictional piece before but I love the idea of applying what I’ve learned about writing to improving other writers’ stories in whatever way I can. Also, if you must know, English is not my first language, even though I’m more comfortable using it than my mother tongue.

posted 20 hours ago @ 19 Apr 2014 with 1 note


(So I was doing research for myself, but I thought that it might be useful.)

Adjectives for Smile

radiant; broad; beautiful; sexy; lovely; rustic; uneasy; gracious; seductive; warm; disarming; regretful; winning; surprised; bitter; reminiscent; whimsical; boyish; girlish; wreathed; metallic; faint; apologetic; affectionate; sweet; amiable; solitary; pitying; ridiculous; quizzical; spicy; special; contagious; fawning amused; icy; wistful; courteous; crafty withering; beaming; dazzling; ravished; enormous uncontrolled; sickly; sly; devilish; maternal; eager naked; frank; joyous; complacent; brilliant answering; forced; angry; sympathetic wanton; contemptuous; deadly; sad; simulated; audible; illumined; parting; approving; ironical; mocking; sudden; indulgent; welcoming; irradiating; agreeable; restrained; watery; rare; playful; superior; arch; perpetual; innocent; sparkling; big; somber; polished; responding; irrepressible; religious; peculiar; convenient; everlasting; tolerant; vapid; priceless; vague; racked; complicated; smart; polite; murderous; disdainful sunny; indomitable; sinister; diabolical; complaisant; dim; patient; haughty; endless; rapid; passing; benign; lurid; crooked; placid; hot; grave; malicious; incredulous; timid; bland; provocative peerless; vivacious; mellow; wan; new quiet; calm; abrupt; loving; sagacious; cautious; buoyant; greasy; sardonic; conciliatory; sidelong; nasty; dawning; grim; ironical; false; meaning; sustaining; saucy; atoning; cynical; prodigal; charming; natural indifferent; tolerant; wry; little; visible mournful; naughty; weary; patronizing; languid deprecating; fitful; humorous; sarcastic; mutual; idiotic; frigid; hospitable; doubtful; ingratiating counterfeit; curious; mischievous; childlike exultant; saturnine; speculative; pensive immutable; condescending; pert; impish roguish; ghastly; rueful; hollow; unctuous inane; joyless; wild; satirical; reassuring slow; hideous; flattering; listless; parting fleeting; engaging; severe; immortal; insipid; moonshine; fascinating; facile; beatific; restless; scornful; blossomed; wondering; moony; senile; ambrosial; covert; airy; incisive; faded; shy; social; angelic; envious; debonair; bashful; artificial; waking; antiseptic; mischievous; paternal; dubious; malevolent; roguish; hungry; pale ready; clear; thoughtless; gentle; infectious conscious; timorous; haughty; frequent backward; enamored; obnoxious; pallid derisive; beguiling; excited; brittle; smarmy; conceited; sneering; wide; rascally; timid; meek; reluctant; courageous; nervous; kind; involuntary; smothered; ardent; brave; beaming; glowing; incandescent; inviting; fake; phony; imploring; practiced; delightful; endearing; cheerful.

Verbs for Smile

achieve—; answer with—; bestow—; cloud—; conceal—; crinkle into—; extinguish—; extract—; flash—; grant—; illuminate with —; induce—; loosen—; manage—; mock— permit—; provoke—; quench—; repress— rouse—; share—; shed—; suppress— throw—; toss—; wear—; wreathe in— wrinkle into—; —abashes; —basks; — confronts; —contorts; —creases; —crinkles; —deludes; —departs; —disconcerts; —disparages; —fades; —flashes; —flickers; —hides; —hovers; —lightens; —lingers; — mantles; —plays; —reassures; —renders; —reveals; —twitches.

Adverbs for Smile

delightedly; approvingly; shrewdly; affectionately; reluctantly; ecstatically; whimsically; tolerantly; radiantly; indulgently; benevolently; tremulously;grimly; sympathetically; blandly; beamingly; wanly; auspiciously; impudently; disarmingly; mischievously; magnanimously; unctuously; contemptuously; lewdly, winsomely; wryly; languidly; artificially; automatically; apathetically; benignly; facetiously; superficially; demurely; guilelessly; angelically; affably; ambiguously; coyly; cynically; cunningly; exultantly; exaggeratedly; cryptically; ruefully; benevolently.

reblogged 23 hours ago @ 19 Apr 2014 with 4,594 notes via/source

If anyone participating in deancasbigbang needs a beta reader, we have five pages of beta’s that you can look through!

posted 1 day ago @ 19 Apr 2014 with 13 notes


Hey guys, I’ve just made a Paranatural blog, where I’ll be posting caps from the webcomic. It’s called paracaps, please follow!
If you don’t read it though, could I ask you to signal boost please?

Shameless self-promotion

reblogged 1 day ago @ 18 Apr 2014 with 5 notes via/source


This is a follow-up to my Why Good Characters Aren’t Always Good post, but this time I’m going to focus more on antagonists than protagonists. I previously talked about the differences between writing a strong character (well-written, developed, interesting) and writing a morally strong character. This time I’m going to talk about writing a strong antagonist that might also have strong morals. It’s important to remember that your antagonist will not always be wrong; they are just someone who opposes your protagonist.

Your antagonist won’t always do the wrong thing

Just like your protagonist won’t always do the right thing, your antagonist isn’t always trying to destroy the world. In fact, your antagonist might actually do the right thing every once in a while and they might be the one with all the right ideas. They might decide to save your protagonist, even if they don’t necessarily agree with what they’re doing. They might even side with your protagonists on some issues. The antagonist doesn’t always have to be out to completely destroy your protagonist, so keep that in mind. Take time to discover their motivations and how it will fit into your story.

Good vs. Good is an interesting way to think about characters

If you want to write an interesting story, think of your character conflict as good vs. good. Your protagonist thinks they are doing the right thing, but so does your antagonist in most cases. I know there have been cases when the antagonist is just an awful person, but most of the time they do think what they’re doing is necessary. If we find reasons to side with both your protagonist and antagonist, your story becomes very fascinating. Consider that both characters believe they are in the right.

Your antagonist might have the best intentions in mind

You protagonist is only the protagonist because it’s the character your story is focusing on. They’re the main character of your novel and the one we’re told to care about more. However, that doesn’t mean your protagonist is making all the right decisions and what they say goes. Your antagonist might also have the best intentions in mind. Some of the best stories are when your protagonist realizes that they might not have been making the best decisions OR when they see themselves in the antagonist. Remember, your antagonist might think they’re doing the right thing and they might intend to do something good.

It’s possible for your antagonist to care about your protagonist

Your antagonist and protagonist do not have to hate each other. As I mentioned before, your protagonist does not have to be the good one and your antagonist doesn’t have to be the evil one. They just oppose each other in some way. Usually whatever they want they can’t have unless the other one fails. This doesn’t mean that your antagonist can’t care about what happens to the protagonist. Stories become more interesting when the protagonist and antagonist have a relationship that goes beyond hating each other.

This post is intended to help you switch up how you look at antagonists, so hopefully you can explore this in your writing. Antagonists and protagonists come in many shapes and forms, so don’t always think one has to be “good” and one has to be “evil”. I usually think of the “wrong” character as the one who doesn’t change or develop throughout your story despite the information presented to them and the experiences they go through. Figure out what works for your novel and what helps make the plot most interesting/exciting.

-Kris Noel

reblogged 1 day ago @ 18 Apr 2014 with 912 notes via/source


"THEY ARE ALL OKAY, and all those things could exist in THE SAME WOMAN" - Lori

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the one thing that has stuck with me every day since my English teacher told me it in middle school is:

"When referring to someone, always say who they are before anything else about them, because being a person always comes first"

Instead of saying “the mentally ill man,” say “the man with a mental illness”

Putting someone’s characteristics (especially negative ones) before them is dehumanizing and rude. Don’t do it.

reblogged 3 days ago @ 16 Apr 2014 with 175,277 notes via/source

Tumblr URL: crazyfordestiel
Fandom: One Direction
Language: English
Genre: Romance / Thriller
Pairing: It’s a Zayn Malik fan-fiction.
Rating: M
Warnings: None?
Completed: No
Current length: 8,000
Predicted end length: Around 15,000
Title: Wingless
BioElle Davis, decides to end her life one night. When she accidentally messages the wrong number to say goodbye, she finds herself trying to be saved by a boy, Zayn. 
What you wish the beta reader to help you with: English is not my first language so I need help with my grammar etc and I also have trouble describing how my characters feel.

Anonymous said:
Hey, I just found the blog but I'm sorry if I don't really understand.. I'm a writer and I need a beta (not now, but a couple of months later), and like... What do you exactly do? Is it to find a beta if I told you want I need in a beta (like, you make a post)? Or what? I'm sorry if this is coming out stupid, I just don't understand and as I said, I've only found this blog now. Also, one thing; Do you know how can I find a beta that would work on both FanFic AND original stories? Thanks, anyway.

No worries at all!

We have a list of betas you can go through here. They are sorted by fandom, and there is a section for original fiction too. All the beta readers will specify if they will beta both or not, so it should be fairly simple to find someone for your story. 

If none of them take your fancy, you can submit a post here. Though please do look through the beta readers first, as then it is more likely for you to get immediate feedback.

I hope this helps and that your search for a beta is successful :)

answered 4 days ago @ 15 Apr 2014 with 2 notes
Anonymous said:
How do I deal with flat writing that lacks enough details and kind of moves the plot along too quickly? I'm writing in first person, present tense and my writing comes out really fast paced (as it goes with present tense) but I feel like it lacks...meat, metaphorically speaking. How can I fatten it up without taking away from the action sequence?


Write through it first and then go back to pick out the places that seem to be going too fast. Here are some reasons for why they seem rushed:

  • Word Choice: Your word choice determines the way a sentence flows by itself and how it flows with other sentences. If a section of your writing seems too fast, rewrite it and rearrange it until is sounds right.
  • Not Enough Something: If you look at a scene that is much shorter than you thought it would be, you might be missing detail or story. You can add more to the story by introduce subplots, adding in a little bit more conflict, or adding something else that puts more space between the beginning and the end. For tips on detail, go through the description tag on the tags page.
  • Pacing: Your pacing is probably off. This goes back to the above points. If you need help with pacing, go through the pacing tag on the tags page.
  • No Down Time: You need some down time in a story. The action scenes can go fast, but after that something should slow the story. The reader needs time between fast paced scenes to wrap their head around what had just happened, but this doesn’t mean it should be a pattern of fast-slow-fast-slow. Mix it up. Entire chapters or scenes shouldn’t be fast or slow. They can be a combination. There can be little moments of quiet in an action scene where you can catch up on everything that happened within the narration and where you can put in more detail about the world around your character.
answered 4 days ago @ 15 Apr 2014 with 552 notes via/source